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Old 02-16-2014, 07:02 PM   #1
Charlene Nahabedian
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Please critique my logo

Please critique my logo. I never did one before & I used the KISS method = keep it simple stupid
Dutch Harbor is the #1 fishing port in the US, that's why I have a fish, & most people are here to work & work a lot, that's the reason for the wording.

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Old 02-16-2014, 07:19 PM   #2
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I like it. Simple but points to what you're known for. I might add "work hard - workout harder" I think that is a little catchier than work hard workout hard. But I don't want to demean the hard work people do up there! You know the area best. Overall a good looking logo!
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Old 02-16-2014, 07:24 PM   #3
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OK thanks Tim. I will see if other people like "workout harder" too and if so, change it to that. Majority rules
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Old 02-16-2014, 07:52 PM   #4
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You really did KISS. Easy to see, read, and recognize. It doesnt spark my interest personally but that is a subjective thing. I do agree with Tim and was going to make the same comment before I looked at his reply. I would change it to "workout harder" sounds a bit better to me
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Old 02-16-2014, 08:10 PM   #5
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Thanks Daniel. I likely should change it to "harder". Also got a comment about changing the format like a crossword puzzle putting CFDH going up/down & the wording going across. That would make it a little more interesting
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Old 02-17-2014, 03:37 AM   #6
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Maybe do the acronym in a curve over the fish & give the fish a slightly wiggly curve. I like the fish tho & the strapline, changed to harder.
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Old 02-17-2014, 08:44 AM   #7
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Thanks Jane :-)
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Old 02-17-2014, 09:38 AM   #8
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I like the simplicity but not the font. Make the font a little more exciting.
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Old 02-17-2014, 09:40 AM   #9
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Thanks Mike!!
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Old 02-17-2014, 10:43 AM   #10
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Re: Please critique my logo

Round 2...updated the font on Mike suggestion. Much less boring I think
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