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Old 11-20-2010, 10:37 AM   #11
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Re: critique my logo ideas please

Bottom right. The bold font goes well with primal.

I agree with the comments about some of the others looking like phat from a distance.
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Old 11-22-2010, 08:06 AM   #12
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Respectfully:
a) no concept
b) the 'logo' is way too big....
your company name is smaller than I'd make a tagline.
The fonts don't really go together.
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Old 11-22-2010, 01:00 PM   #13
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five minute quickie. I dont like the man. spear is out of whack proportionally. and why a spear.... not sure I get the primal part.
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Old 11-22-2010, 04:43 PM   #14
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five minute quickie. I dont like the man. spear is out of whack proportionally. and why a spear.... not sure I get the primal part.
I really dig the top one!!
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Old 11-22-2010, 07:00 PM   #15
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I really dig the top one!!
Me too.
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Old 11-23-2010, 04:59 AM   #16
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Re: critique my logo ideas please

Hi Nik!! Seen (& used) lot of your advice Ive seen in other logs, so thanks!...Hi Troy.

YOU GUYS!!!!! That ones not a 'done' one (none of them are really), but its kinda the hairy arm... ('stone' age - kinda obvious, i dont know if you could convey stone in lineart). I dunno, 'Primal' has become so trite.
Could also use flames through the letters of primal if you use a fat typeface in lineart, make them like a white cutout?? you'd have to be careful about readability though... oh well. I stayed in a holiday inn last nite!!! LOL
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Old 11-23-2010, 09:46 AM   #17
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YOU GUYS!!!!! That ones not a 'done' one
Or maybe it is...
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Old 11-23-2010, 02:30 PM   #18
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great suggestions guys... deb, thanks for the quick drafts.. they look pretty cool.. Heres rough draft of another idea. It needs to be cleaned up a bit, I know..
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Old 11-23-2010, 04:20 PM   #19
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moar...
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Hi Nik!! Seen (& used) lot of your advice Ive seen in other logs, so thanks!...Hi Troy.

YOU GUYS!!!!! That ones not a 'done' one (none of them are really), but its kinda the hairy arm... ('stone' age - kinda obvious, i dont know if you could convey stone in lineart). I dunno, 'Primal' has become so trite.
Could also use flames through the letters of primal if you use a fat typeface in lineart, make them like a white cutout?? you'd have to be careful about readability though... oh well. I stayed in a holiday inn last nite!!! LOL
Yea. but it grabs me, just saying.

Oh Hi ya back, glad I can help, I see you arround too.
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great suggestions guys... deb, thanks for the quick drafts.. they look pretty cool.. Heres rough draft of another idea. It needs to be cleaned up a bit, I know..
She doest look ''primal'' to me, or should I say convey the idea of being primal.
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