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Old 05-10-2008, 08:08 PM   #3
Chris Drewry
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Re: My First Article

Thanks so much, this is the kind of feedback I am looking for. A few of my friends read the piece and had little to no advice. That leads me to believe they either did not read it, or are as illiterate as I.

Now that you point them out, the elementary mistakes are glaring... at least the ones I can see.

There is much work to be done with my writing. I will also look into your literary suggestion.

Thank you again Ivan
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